Thunderstorms and Greed

Ah Saturday. Here is a haiku I just wrote. Well, two, actually, if you want to be technical, but I don't, because Haiku rules are broken all the time and for all intents and purposes this is one piece meant to be taken together. It pretty much sums up my entire week in as few words as possible.

Sky alternates blue
and gray as thunder clouds clap
and bolts light the sky.

And I'm disgusted.
by greedy society.
Clear sky, I go home.
-written 5/30/09-

Your thoughts?